South Of Nowhere Fan Fiction

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Spencer waited as she watched Ashley get to her feet and slowly make her way towards the bay window beside the front door. The brunette tried to look inside the house to see if that's where the commotion was coming from. "Shit, Ash!" Spencer exclaimed.

"What?! What is it, do you see the Killer, is he behind me?!" Ashley nearly screamed as she quickly turned to look around.

"No, it's um...it's your neck. Hickey." Spencer admitted bashfully as she looked anywhere but at the brunette.

Heart nearly bursting with fright, Ashley held a hand to her chest. "You scared the shit out of me, Carlin." Ashley breathed out as she turned back to the window about to inspect the hickey. But the body in front of the bay window inside the house stopped her in her tracks.

"Jesus Christ!"

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04/23/2010, 21:38:41 PM
From: SoNFANFOREVER 74.79.228.166
Comments: ok so you had me practically crying one minute with their declarations of love for each other, and then pissed off the next when spence didn't jump in to tell ash that she meant what she said! arrgghhhh! anyway I digress. this whole chap was freaking awesome, ash climbing through vents, their fight that turned totally hot, even their little agreement about fooling around (although damn I wish they'd just tell each other they love each other and make the other realize they mean it!!), everything! so is carmen dead? guess we'll find out soon enough. excellent update stix, very much worth the wait! pms please!!

04/24/2010, 01:44:00 AM
From: queenred12 68.184.81.233
Comments: fuck. okay soooo one sec i'm like shittng bricks scared that they are about to die. then the next i'm pissed cuz theyre back to oh i hate you. and spencer seriously needs to fucking chill with the "i'm gonna be alone and deal with shit on my own" cuz isn't that how her and ashley stopped being friends in the first place. i'm sorry but i would have left carmen walking by her damnself. and i don't give a fuck what anyone says, i think the killer is(...) but seriously is carmen and lily dead cuz even though i don't like carmen and lily is ok, it would suck if they're dead and spence and ash missed it cuz they can't keep their hands off each other. so that was an awesome chapter, i got super excited when i saw it there then i started yelling at the computer like they could really hear me, but anywho awesome chapter, can not wait for more cuz this story is hella badass. keep up the good work. pms

04/24/2010, 02:49:33 AM
From: slushy 112.198.139.145
Comments: i missed this glad you updated. Oh man.. Why can't they just be honest with each other? But hell I'm not complaining about the sexual tension. Great job. PMS

04/24/2010, 12:57:48 PM
From: NaughtyC08 155.247.166.35
Comments: OMGGGGGG!!!!! Okay please PMS like NOW! This story is amazing I want more!

04/24/2010, 13:27:13 PM
From: keepXmeXawake 70.176.65.179
Comments: Ok, I liked: 1. Spencer using "for sure" on Ashley, that was very telling. 2. Ninja Ashley ;) no further explanation needed for that. 3. The reference to "Murder, She Wrote." 4. Declarations of love. 5. Making out while on the brink of certain death ... hot. 6. the "fooling around" clause. I DID NOT like: 1. rat poop ... eww 2. taking back the declarations of love 3. constant interruptions to the girls making out 4. Carmen. Oh and p.s LOVED the birthday greeting. Thanks sweetie.

04/25/2010, 01:39:09 AM
From: xwpblue 72.23.79.156
Comments: What an emotional roller coaster that was! freakin brilliant :) of course I knew they were going to be interrupted- but i was pleasantly surprised by how far they'd gotten. I'm not sure why neither one is capable of owning their confessions of love, but I do know that love makes you do and say stupid shit so I'll chock it up to that for now :)

04/26/2010, 19:46:10 PM
From: 2bz2breading 71.195.161.77
Comments: De-lurking to say I love this story. PMS!!

04/28/2010, 10:11:35 AM
From: DaniZGE 72.57.95.219
Comments: Your stories are really fun to read. So fun, in fact, that I will read them with other people around. Which can be both a good and a very awkward scenario. But I totally dig this story. I will read it anywhere. Just please keep updating.

05/05/2010, 04:21:43 AM
From: luvspencerc 68.171.234.41
Comments: OMG your are one f**ken AMAZING writer pleas please post more soon! I absolutly adore this story it keeps me at the edge of my seat everytime I read it. PMS!

05/31/2010, 23:20:32 PM
From: SONRose 98.18.216.152
Comments: This is a good story and I hope you can continue on with it. I like how they are mad one minute and then all heated up the next. Its hot to do that sometimes.



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