South Of Nowhere Fan Fiction

bystix04

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Spencer dove towards her father and she could feel a pulse and see that he was breathing. "Ashley, we need to get the fuck out of here right the fuck now!" Spencer shouted, completely terrified. She quickly told the brunette about the phone call and together they tried to stir Arthur.

"We need to call 911!" Ashley yelled. But once she picked up the phone she realized it was dead. "Shit, Spence, the fucking phones aren't working!" Wordlessly they both took their cell phones out, breathing hard with racing hearts. Although they knew they wouldn't get any signal being in the basement, they were both prettified nonetheless, and shaking hard.

"Holy shit!" Ashley whispered. Spencer followed Ashley's gaze to the monitors behind her and watched, horrified, as someone broke into the diner's doors; the sound of the shattering glass resonated down into the basement.

Both girls' heads jerked up to where the unknown person entered the diner above them. Simultaneously, their eyes went back to the monitors to watch the person in the gray hoodie and black snow mask look around the empty diner before heading towards the kitchen.

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03/12/2010, 19:39:12 PM
From: Spashley4eva93 74.107.100.248
Comments: omg. that was intense. i actually got scared n jumped at every noise i heard. great chapter!!! PMS!!

03/12/2010, 22:40:12 PM
From: keepXmeXawake 70.176.65.179
Comments: You brought back sassy pants! And yay for making out while intoxicated (hehe)! Those two girls are such experts at avoiding the issue, they take one step forward and two steps back! Spencer was right, it's almost worse than when they "hated" each other! Go talk to her Spencer! Well, after you save your dad and run away from the killer, that is. Why does the killer keep going back to the diner? Oh right, Carmen was supposed to be working that night. What's up with Marie saving Ashley? And why was she so mad? Is that not part of the grand plan? Why did Sherry take money from her bank account? Why isn't Aiden answering his phone (not that I care)? Who called to warn them? What happened to Arthur? Why is he always so tired? Why does the killer hate kids so much? There's more than one person in the basement? Why did the killer say "You'd want that, wouldn't you?" after the accomplice suggested checking up on the hostages? Huh ... curiouser and curiouser (I just watched Alice in Wonderland). The plot thickens ... now please write more and don't take too long! I want to know what happens next!!! I'm so demanding, I know. But it's your fault! Thanks for the update!

03/12/2010, 23:03:49 PM
From: SoNFANFOREVER 74.79.228.153
Comments: well I honestly think keepXmeXawake said just about everything I was going to say! I just want to jump into the story so I can slap ash and spence upside their heads.. good grief.. someone just start talking! ugh! how frustrating. anyway, another fantastic update. I\'m also demanding more! and yes it is your fault! you\'re just too damn good at what you do so start writing!!!!

03/13/2010, 01:56:57 AM
From: keepXmeXawake 70.176.65.179
Comments: SoNFANFOREVER - I'm sorry, I didn't mean to steal your thoughts! I seem to do that a lot, huh? How rude! haha But let's blame Stix, I like that plan a lot! Btw Stix, I came back to say that YES, this definitely didn't disappoint! Ok, I'm still demanding an update! Start writing! Drink more redbull!!!!!

03/13/2010, 12:09:42 PM
From: sparkypants2 216.245.239.238
Comments: Yeah keepXmeXawake pretty much said everything that needs to say. well you should be writing now i want answers and i want them now i can\'t help it you make it so damn addicting. like keepXmeXawake said drink more redbull and get an update up quickly as possible. but don\'t drink toooo much redbull where you have to go to the hospital for over consumption that wouldn\'t be good at all. well thanks for the update i been really wanted to read this story lately and when i saw you updated i did a little happy dance okay and big a happy dance thank God that i was home alone at the time. well take care and get your ass working on the next chap. sorry if i am sounding too rude i am not meaning to.

03/13/2010, 12:14:53 PM
From: sparkypants2 216.245.239.238
Comments: oh and SonFANFOREVER i with you too i wish i could jump iin the story and do the same thing and also tell every one if you see a someone in a gray hoodie to run for there freaking lives even you know the person.

03/14/2010, 18:55:24 PM
From: Irishgrl33 65.184.75.107
Comments: Yeah keepXmeXawake has said everything. I also wanted to know if there is going to be a sequel to marshall daniel\'s cause I would sooo love to see what happens with everyone.

03/14/2010, 19:11:35 PM
From: NaughtyC08 129.32.24.47
Comments: Okay you have to PMS now! The suspense is killing me. PMS!!! Also, a recap woud be great!

03/31/2010, 10:44:04 AM
From: babykennedy 67.149.25.140
Comments: please post more soon... im dying here, this was not the time for a hiatus!! lol so please hurry back with an update!

03/31/2010, 21:53:20 PM
From: SONRose 151.213.232.131
Comments: I would say be like 911 and save me from this need to read but 911 is slow so just be fast haha. Nah take as long as you need because its an awesome story. I miss you though big sis. Well love ya. Keep on posting.

04/04/2010, 21:27:22 PM
From: kat130 98.111.54.189
Comments: Write more soon, you can't keep us waiting forever. Absolutely LOVE the reference to Sassy Pants.



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