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I thought about how I would approch the girl, but I kept coming up with blanks.
I was usually just went up to a girl and told her I liked her, and that was that.
But this situation was different, I was actually trying to make friends with this girl.
The tricky part was actually talking to her.

Ashley: "Guess this year didn\'t turn out to be so bad, huh?"

Vanessa: "Guess not." She said laughing at me.

What the fuck?! First, I want to be just friends with a girl. And second, I\'m thinking out loud too!

 

 


There it was guys my first Fan Fiction.

 

Tell me What you think about it.

Did you like it? Did you hate it?

What improvements should I make?

And most importantly, should I keep writing?

As I said before, good & bad comments are definitely helpful.

 





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03/11/2010, 02:28:37 AM
From: my_sunshine 203.146.5.83
Comments: I\'d like to see where it goes. Please continue :)




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