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I say quietly.

Ashley: "Yeah, Spence?" She answers softly, no longer chuckling.

Spencer: "About Gwen..."

Ashley: "Best friends don't do that stuff, Spencer." She interrupts, anger now in her voice.

Spencer: "I don't like you being that with her, though." I scold. I watch as she shifts uncomfortably in her blankets and lets out a sigh.

Ashley: "Okay, Spencer." She concedes, sounding tired. I nod and get back into my bed.

Spencer: "Night, sassy pants." It's quiet for a moment before she calls back.

Ashley: "Night, dulcissima." I'm hoping this weekend during the bachelorette parties I can get Ashley to open up by getting her angry, drunk, and horny. I need to get her to open up so I can repair this. It's painful not to be with her.

I sigh softly before I roll over and take my notebook and pen out of my bag beside me. I don't even think, I just start to write...



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07/09/2009, 15:30:21 PM
From: *stuckhere4now* 72.56.196.250
Comments: OMG freakin awesome plz post more soon



07/09/2009, 15:45:47 PM
From: Ash&Spence1987 24.219.39.241
Comments: that was a awesome update.....cant wait for more



07/09/2009, 15:45:53 PM
From: keepXmeXawake 70.176.65.179
Comments: To be honest, I could hardly concentrate on the story ... all that was going through my head was ..."Oh no, only two more chapters left! So sad ..." So yeah, I'm in denial. But c'mon, can you blame me? I can almost understand what's going through Ashley's head, I really hope that Gage's devious plan works (can I have her?). That bachelorette party is going to be mighty interesting for sure ... will everyone be off having sex? Spencer does have a point, the ice machine (as hot as that was) surely can't be the last time! They have to go out with a BANG! Get writing missy(that goes for you and for Spencer)! Have I told you lately how much I love your story? I do ...



07/09/2009, 15:47:06 PM
From: xwpblue 72.23.64.51
Comments: awww maaaaaan! i can sooo feel the pain they both feel! seriously, im starting to get choked up! PMSASAP! luv you- mean it! :D



07/09/2009, 15:48:11 PM
From: Mute 216.175.101.109
Comments: =O O-M-F-*dies*



07/09/2009, 15:54:32 PM
From: sbd4l1994 98.215.192.240
Comments: i don't know what i'm going to do when this ends... lets not think about that, lets think about how awesome this story is and how spence is gonna get ash back! yayyy =] so excited for the next chapter, PMS please!



07/09/2009, 16:29:32 PM
From: chelle5432 93.107.197.84
Comments: Kay I loved all of this chapter, every last word from the intensity of the fight to the hotness of seductive spencer on the rugby field to the sweetness of Gage wanting her friend back and Spashley at the end but my favourite part was most definitely Spencer playing the tuba and singing the love songs she just stuck together you had me almost crying with laughter heck I'm even laughing now just thinking about it. I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! And aww really just two more chapters I'm almost getting withdrawals just thinking about it :(



07/09/2009, 16:40:39 PM
From: dawniekey 69.224.218.158
Comments: okay gage and ash going at it is hot but spencer tackling ashley was a lot better haha. i hate there is only two and so want a sequel, like five year reunion or something to get them back to the school or idk but urg i want it to continue.



07/09/2009, 17:25:36 PM
From: SweetAce 98.195.144.195
Comments: -sigh-..only 2 more chapters?!..this story has been freaking incredible..i will truly be sad when its over..omg Spencer playing the tuba and singing was hilarious..i could just picture her playing something random and then singing hahahaha..PMS..i get so excited when i come to this site and see you've made a post hahaha..like fangirl screams and all hahaha..



07/09/2009, 17:43:49 PM
From: littledragonfly 82.2.42.112
Comments: I was on the edge of my seat all the way through that. I even had to take a quick break in the middle, I just couldn't take the emotional overload it was that intense from start to finish! Favourite bits, apart from it all?!?! Um, the end where they said good night, can't be together, can't be apart...that's Spashley love. Oh and the rugby game, umm and of course I was all 'OMG' complete Valley girl when Ashley accused Gage of liking her sloppy seconds. You rock Dude!! But 2 chapters left?!?! I'm going to form an MD withdrawal programme....any takers?? We can have group therapy where we mourn the loss...*sobs* xx



07/09/2009, 17:43:58 PM
From: roxystyle011 72.68.70.195
Comments: "oh sweet jesus" "Oh my godddddd" "You've GOT to be kidding me" "OH Jesus H" ... just a few of the things i was screaming as i was reading this...you know i love the dramaa babe! such a great update, i'm so confused thoo i feel like spencer needs to let ashley be miserable for a bit and not be so nice to her! grumbleee but it was sweet at the end, any other tricks up gages sleeve? like a kiss?!!? ohhhh la laaa OH and i can't believe spencer didn't freak out when ashley referred to her as 'sloppy seconds'! that's when i said "oh sweet jesus" for the first time. and thanks for my ad even tho i forced you into it against you will and loved the teenager in love i was wondering when i'd see that AND i enjoyed spencer's makeshift song...andd gages confident comebacks to ashley, rockstar. classic. i basically loved every part about it



07/09/2009, 18:58:34 PM
From: xwpblue 72.23.64.51
Comments: OH! and i forgot to mention my fav line: "Uh oh...I feel funny in my pants!" lol! im so gonna borrow that for use in real life :D



07/09/2009, 19:51:13 PM
From: Emmelts 173.70.118.161
Comments: NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO this can't one of the last 3 chapters left , I refuse to accept it !!! Perhaps a Sequel... and yet another great chapter , the rugby game was great and the fight between Ash and Gwen!! And what happend to Ash, did something Happen to her behind that bathroom door with the asshole? MORE MORE MORE and MORE TO MD AFTER HS ENDS!!!



07/09/2009, 20:01:57 PM
From: Inmyownwords92 76.90.95.176
Comments: absolutely loved the chapter psh love every chapter haha bu aww man only 2 chapters left?=[ but i know theyre gonna be good so i have no worries bu n e who ashley needs to suck it up and stop being a pussy haha loved the fight it was crazy i hope they get back together tho i bet they will so yea the update was great cant wait for more =]



07/09/2009, 22:36:24 PM
From: tylo 24.165.166.214
Comments: I love this get back here



07/09/2009, 22:59:49 PM
From: itellueveryting 71.65.239.148
Comments: great update as always...funny as hell...pms



07/09/2009, 23:15:59 PM
From: SoNFANFOREVER 74.79.230.92
Comments: yes I will be needing some therapy after this is finished.... I'll be very depressed! anyway loved the rugby field scene w spence seducing ash and then vice versa. and the ending was beautiful if not a bit heartbreaking. I can't stand them not being together!!! it sucks. however you need to post more soon because I'm dying to know what spence comes up with.. although the 14 song combo was interesting... I have that dream song in my head now thank you very much. anyway fantastic as always hun!



07/10/2009, 00:41:01 AM
From: smthngIkike2do 75.199.163.222
Comments: I amazed and like Sarah and Kelli my mouth was hanging open to. That was harsh but so needed to get Ashley off her ass. I love the fact that they know each other so well that they cant sleep without the other. Its like Gage said their own little bubble. I want an invite to the bachletted party. You know it going to be HOT.



07/10/2009, 01:48:13 AM
From: SONRose 98.18.205.225
Comments: Wow...that was really good. I mean the way Ash was beating on Gwen and just the feelings that everyone knows is still there but just wont act on because Ash is hiding something. This is very well written and entertaining. Good job. I cant wait to read the next one.



07/10/2009, 13:20:43 PM
From: softball_girl 69.196.221.85
Comments: fuckin amazing as always. can't wait for the next post.



07/10/2009, 18:18:44 PM
From: emoxxkid3 76.19.95.106
Comments: This story was actually the first one I've read on this site. This week I've been away at college and was so pissed when I didn't have anytime to get online to read. It's really quite sad that you're ending the story. I hope you do a sequel or something. I mean take these as a sign: You always have over 1000 people read your storyThe comments all say how sad they are about the story endingThe rating is 5 every time!Just a few observations. I am among the loving of your stories.



07/11/2009, 23:58:15 PM
From: t.A.T.u. 71.29.241.85
Comments: Finally, everyone is confronting Ash! :) I think it is a good sign that she called Spencer Dulcissima at the end...I hope the next chapter is the party! I'm so sad that there are only two chapters left, but at the same time I'm ecstatic because I can't wait to see how you end it!!!




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