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THEN A BLESSING HAPPENED. PAULAS ASS EXPLODED.
EVERY BODY CHEERED EXCEPT PIMP AND LUNCH LADY NOW THEY DONT HAVE A THIRD MEMBER IN THEIR LOVE MAKING:( "YESSSSS MY WIFE IS DEAD I CAN FINALLY BE WITH CLAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!" Aruther shouted. just then clay walked in while everybody watched the wedding. then aruthurs mom shot clay. "SHIT MOM WHY!!!!!!"ARUTHUR YELLED HEARTBROKEN. "I TOLD YOU ONCE AND IMA TELL YA ASS AGAIN BITCH HE WAS TRYIN TO MUGG ME!!!!"SHE LIED. Aruthur sat back down and eyed pimp"i guess im gay"he thought and groped pimp then started making out later lunch lady joined. EPILOUGE SPENCER AND ASHLEY LAUGHED AT PAULAS FUNERAL AND ARUTHER BECAME PIMPS AND LUNCH LADYS THIRD PARTNER IN THE LOVE MAKING AND GLEN BECAME A DUMPSTER CLEANER AND IS HOOKIN' ON THE SIDE AND CLAY'S GHOST BECAME A STRIPPER AND RICK FROM DEGRASSI FELL IN LOVE WITH TERRIS CORPSE AND THEY SOON GOT MARRIED AND HAD SOME DAMN UGLY KIDS THAT SMELLED LIKE DECAYING ASS.
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06/26/2009, 05:01:43 AM
From: jazziejazz
173.58.121.97
Comments: your back? are you fucking kidding me? 3 fucking stars? wow...you do know that fera fawset just died this morning of anal cancer right?...this is a serious matter and i dont like the way you write...i...you can have fun withouth disrecpecting everyone. this is very hurtfull to gays, african americans, people with cancer or anyone who has had to deal with a family member or close freind go thru cancer...this is very offencive and i dont think you understand how much this might hurt someone....you can have fun but there is a line and you need to know when to stay off of it and back the hell up from it....idk what else i can tell you i was pissed off last time so this may be alot calmer but you shouldnt play around with "ass cancer" its very serious...and the drugs and everything? you can have fun without putting stuff that will offend ppl hell if it gets you to stop posting this story i will even offer to help you....as much as i can cuz if your anything like how you write you need professional help.

06/26/2009, 10:45:59 AM
From: Angivis
74.14.123.117
Comments: Dude what the fuck? Are you five? Go away.. this is not funny, this is stupid and immature.

06/26/2009, 13:23:23 PM
From: AberFitch14
96.243.24.56
Comments: im kinda speechless

06/26/2009, 14:34:02 PM
From: LAVIZZY
71.15.46.48
Comments: well for starters,BITCH THIS IS MY GODDAMN STORY AND I WROTE THIS BEFORE WHATS HER NAME EVEN GOT CANCER SO GET UR SHIT STRAIGHT AND MY SISTER IS A BIG DYKE ITS CALLED FREEDOM OF SPEECH BITCH AND I AM NOT FUCKING RASCIST!!!!BTW WHO TOOK MY GODDAMN STARS

06/26/2009, 14:34:18 PM
From: LAVIZZY
71.15.46.48
Comments: YOU JEALOUS ASS BITCHES!!!

06/26/2009, 15:52:25 PM
From: SecondTry
68.32.136.103
Comments: lol jealous of what? This may very well be the WORSE thing EVER. Please stop writing, you really suck.

06/26/2009, 15:54:47 PM
From: SecondTry
68.32.136.103
Comments: PS- I cant even get through reading this without laughing because of you're stupidity and immaturity. I wish we could give negative stars haha

06/26/2009, 19:14:52 PM
From: Topaz
74.14.123.117
Comments: Wow.. Who would even give you two stars? Seriously this is the most immature, ridiculous thing I ever read. This is insulting to people who ACTUALLY CAN WRITE. Just stop it, go away again no one missed you.

06/27/2009, 18:39:40 PM
From: Andie1987
67.182.202.238
Comments: I don't even know where to begin...I cannot believe you have ONE star! This thing, I won't even call it a story, deserves to be burned. Please if you're going to write at least learn how to. Cancer and drugs are two very powerful subjects that should in no way be taken lightly. And your talking about marrying corpses and having babies? What is wrong with you? Jazziejazz is correct you need some serious help. Now go away and let the actual talented writers create something worth reading.

06/28/2009, 11:48:26 AM
From: syd1990
75.32.55.224
Comments: Okay. So im not gonna angrily rant at you about your seemingly endless stupidity. But seriously, you are offending everyone on this board and you need to stop posting your material. You are a truly heartless cunt, and from the bottom of my heart I sincerely believe that you are actually retarded.

06/28/2009, 17:15:32 PM
From: Ash&Spence1987
24.219.44.94
Comments: take a hint WE DONT WANT YOU HERE!! i ant make any more clear for your your sick and twisted and just plain fucked in the head. I went thru and read the rest of your stories and they were all crap and got all bad reviews yet you still posted go figure. your not a writer cuz a because no selfrespecting writerwould post this shit.heres a short list of real writers stix04, secondtry, babykennedy, Ms rocker and sonfanforever learn something from them till the STAY THE FUCK OUT!!!!

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