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Not three minutes later the police finally arrived to find Kevin Jenkins handcuffed to a chair, bruised, jaw and nose broken, and bleeding. Bleeding from the neck. Bleeding from the word I carved into his skin that would scar and perhaps fade- eventually. But until that day, the word "Rapist" would be edged into his skin so that everyone would know.

He would be sent to jail for the crimes he had committed at the hotel room. He would be kept in jail for the false crimes Ashley and my friends put in his file. And even if he were to get out one day, Kevin Jenkins would find that he would have nothing to come back to.

He didn't know it, but he lost his life that day he raped me. I lost a lot too that day. But unlike him, my life after that only got better. Each day gets better and better.

I went to Ms. Diaz's house and thanked her again and again for everything she'd done for me and continues to do. I'm guessing that Ashley's private conversation with her once I went to the restroom put an end to Ms. Diaz's financial responsibility of me.

I held my mother in my arms for a long time before I promised that I'd see her soon and call her when I got back to school. I gave my brother an equality long hug and made the same promise. I held my Goddaughter in my arms as I swore to her that I'd be spoiling her in no time. And then we all took the Martin to the airport to board the Dooly's jet; stocked fully with alcohol. But I found that I didn't need any of it this time.

We touched down in Vermont late Monday night and we barely spoke a word as we drove back to Marshall Daniel's. There really wasn't much to say.

We went to Ohio so that I could get closure and I had managed just that, and so much more. I was able to forgive and heal. I was able to thank those who had helped me in the past and are there for me now.

And tomorrow, when I get up and attend my first full day of Marshall Daniel's, I will know that despite everything that I've gone through and all the crazy things that happened in Ohio that I am whole again.

That I am Spencer Carlin again. But, you know, the improved model that has sex in bathrooms. And that's a Spencer Carlin I can live with.



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06/19/2009, 14:45:37 PM
From: RokkyRoad 74.72.230.249
Comments: I am WONDER WOMAN!Even though the situation was bad it that manage to make me laugh. xD



06/19/2009, 14:46:41 PM
From: littledragonfly 82.2.42.112
Comments: Wow! If the story ended there it would have been an amazing run. NO! Don't get me wrong, you have to write more! Lot's more...Please *begs* Fantastic, gripping, sad, funny and talk about closure!....As usual you did it all Stix, I sooo want to be you when I grow up *sighs* Good job babe and keep 'em coming!



06/19/2009, 15:08:50 PM
From: Ash&Spence1987 24.219.39.241
Comments: That was a good update. Im glad that spencer knew that something was wrong with ashley......and as for kevin i hope he gets put away for life..... pms!



06/19/2009, 15:25:03 PM
From: Mute 216.175.65.106
Comments: I liked this update very much, and I hope they sterilized him and broke him permanently. =)



06/19/2009, 15:43:21 PM
From: River_R 41.222.87.30
Comments: oh YEAhhhhhhh!! now that's what i'm talking about, stix! woo hoooo! :)*clap clap*PS-how often do u check ur inbox here? (hint hint)



06/19/2009, 15:48:06 PM
From: mayagray 72.201.236.64
Comments: Um ok first of all - AWESOME chapter! I wanted her to chop his junk off but um yeah the cops might not have been able to let that much slide. Also - can you really text the cops!?! After I read that I've been trying to look it up but I can't find anything. That would be sweet.



06/19/2009, 15:53:50 PM
From: mayagray 72.201.236.64
Comments: Ok I did a search for the city where I live and all I came up with was this tiny.cc/mCGVW which is pretty much LAME :(



06/19/2009, 16:12:01 PM
From: SweetAce 98.195.144.195
Comments: OMG STIX!!!...I LOVE IT!..Spencer freakin rocked..she was hilarious in the beginning omg Wonder Woman!..hahaha..This story has been great and I'm sad its ending..but PMS!..



06/19/2009, 16:22:38 PM
From: itellueveryting 71.65.239.148
Comments: that was so good..pms



06/19/2009, 16:33:09 PM
From: Emmelts 166.137.133.41
Comments: Lol that was great im on the nj transit on the way home reading this on my iphone i got up to her weapon i just bursted out laughing now ppl think im crazy lol im so glad that u did use the tug o war to beat him silly with it . Oh stix how i adore you lol !!!



06/19/2009, 16:35:52 PM
From: KGould02 69.68.220.76
Comments: That was sooo amazing!!! The ending of that was just... wow. I can't even find words to describe how good that was.



06/19/2009, 16:42:11 PM
From: Wicked1 76.90.216.138
Comments: Awwww, that was great. That could be a final chapter, but I hope it's not. I'm so glad Spencer went back to the room for Ashley, I knew she would. I knew she was going to know something was going on. I laughed out loud when Spencer rushed into the bathroom, with the double-sided dildo, hahahah. I'm so glad Kevin got his ass beat. I thought Spencer was going to slit his throat, I'm glad she didn't though, even though he deserved it, then she would have went to jail. Great chapter, great story, UPDATE again soon.



06/19/2009, 16:51:47 PM
From: Ashley99 83.28.213.38
Comments: I'm just... WOW. i'm speachless. This story is getting better with every chapter. I have no idea how you do this but please, continue. :)



06/19/2009, 17:36:07 PM
From: Spashley4eva93 96.244.16.238
Comments: this is by far my favorite chapter...you out did yourself my friend. this was awesome!!! omg the weapons...hilarious. I almost cried when kevin punched gage i was like OMG but n e ways great update... i officially adore even more. PMS!!!!



06/19/2009, 18:05:55 PM
From: jazziejazz 173.58.115.147
Comments: wow that was....wow this story would be a great movie you should consider that...id wtach it over and over...not sure how it would be played by dif ppl and spencer and ashleys name changed lol but wow i love this story like crazy...what scared you in the comments? lol anyways pm me anytime if you wanna talk or something lol pms great update!! :D



06/19/2009, 18:20:09 PM
From: chelle5432 93.107.77.91
Comments: Kay well that was intense and a lil bit scary but so well written. Great update I'm really glad he got his comeuppance and Spencer got closure. I'm a teeny bit worried about that look Ashley gave her though I'm sure you'll get to that soon enough. :-)



06/19/2009, 20:52:27 PM
From: factoflife02 74.190.177.77
Comments: Sigh. Have I told you how amazing you are lately? No? Well that's because you haven't gotten online in about ten years. =] Anyways, this was fantastic, as per usual. Spencer is hilarious. Can I have her?



06/19/2009, 22:04:16 PM
From: crazycraze95 68.20.12.228
Comments: oh wow, that was amazing. Hell yeah. I love payback! Ohhhh, I just want to wring his neck. Here's an idea: how 'bout you do an epilouge or something that shows Jenkins as someone's bitch in jail. He could be the communal bitch even, eh? Great job on this chapter, can't wait for more.



06/19/2009, 22:44:17 PM
From: Inmyownwords92 76.90.95.176
Comments: ok even tho i know this chapter was suppose to be serius but somehow u still made me laugh the whole spencer tackle the kevin guy and screaming im wonder woman i didnt want to laugh but i did but i luved how they beat the shit outta that guy haha he deserved it luvd the update cannot wait for more of course PMS!



06/19/2009, 23:15:50 PM
From: YodaKid 67.239.168.182
Comments: Ok so im feeling as though i should definitely comment on this. my heart was POUNDING and i was yelling at my computer throughout this entire chapter. i love that spencer has ashley senses just like ashley has spencer senses :) i wish i was left in a room with kevin jenkins so i could kick his ass. im sad to see this story ending but its been a good one, probably my favorite on this site. pms!!!



06/20/2009, 00:00:38 AM
From: t.A.T.u. 71.29.246.159
Comments: Wow!...Just WOW!!! I adore this story. So much so in fact that I created an account just so I could review and tell you how amazing both it and you are! You managed to make it funny, witty, serious, scary, and dare I say orgasmic, all while sticking to an amazing plot!!! :) LOLz! Spence was so funny in the beginning of this chapter. I was almost freaking out when I read the chapter before this one! Then I started to freak out even more when Spence ran back to yell at Ash! However, her choice of weapons was hilarious, even when I was freaking out I was laughing my ass off! I actually got weird looks from the people around me!I'm really sad that this story is coming to a close because it is amazing, but I guess even the best of things have to come to an end...However until then I hope you update soon!



06/20/2009, 02:16:19 AM
From: SONRose 98.18.208.0
Comments: That was great. I should have known Spencer would save Ashley. I completely agree with how Spencer acted and that was strong of her to do so. This was a great chapter, well they all are haha. Good job. Your a fantastic writer, but you already knew that.



06/20/2009, 02:59:25 AM
From: SoNFANFOREVER 74.79.230.92
Comments: wow. stix you are amazing. there was just so much in this one. and LiL D is right about what she said but I agree that you have to write more- lots more! ok so I know it's not forever but I can hope. can't blame a girl for trying. anyway the weapon was too funny that and sara and kelly both saying they had handcuffs too and ash saying 'naturally'. kevin got what he deserved and things are alright again. fantastic. update soon please!



06/20/2009, 03:10:19 AM
From: roxystyle011 96.242.115.253
Comments: do i get a prize for being like the 50th person to comment on this story? you usedddd my name!!! i knew it was coming but i forgot cause when i read it my heart skipped! yup! i'm glad that it was used to do good, and solve a crime/mystery! spencer's so wise... so now if you call me anything by principessa i'll know that something is wrong and i'll be on the first bus/train/flight to philly... promise! i might comment again tomorrow cause i'm pretty drunk, as you know and i may not remember reading it but i love in the first time around schbabe



06/20/2009, 03:19:48 AM
From: dawniekey 69.224.218.163
Comments: wow that sounded like the end but five more chapters, yes, especially since spence still has to deal with meeting up with kevin again...sure she dealt with it but still got to scare her like having bad dreams...and she has to accept ashley's marriage proposal pms



06/20/2009, 06:34:04 AM
From: smthngIkike2do 96.245.100.227
Comments: Im laughing and people all around me are staring. Oh I'm in AC at the Showboat. Hey I told you last time you were F@ckin Fantastic this just proves it.



06/20/2009, 11:13:35 AM
From: *krish8708 124.217.74.46
Comments: wow!at first i was scared I thought he rape ashley but then he didnt!nice chapter despite it make me worried but still it yurn out well..stix you rock!!I hope this is not the last chapter though I would love to see more of them..!



06/20/2009, 12:44:19 PM
From: queenred12 24.126.234.205
Comments: omg i was yelling at my phone for like the first 10 pages. this was an amazing chapter. i love how jess kicked his ass and then everyone got a turn at hitting him. and spencer carving rapist into his neck genius. i hope she carved deep enough so that it stays with him for a long time. and i agree with littledragonfly, that if the story ended there it would have been awesome, but that does not mean we want you to end. anyway keep up the great work i'm looking forward to the return to Marshall Daniel's



06/20/2009, 12:51:33 PM
From: tylo 24.165.164.61
Comments: Ok I was ready to kill you in the last ppost but this one just blew me away how they banded togther to stand up for spence but ultimatly she was able to stand up for herself awesome then they kicked his ass yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great work pms



06/20/2009, 20:29:51 PM
From: SLR 72.39.100.93
Comments: wow.. i seriously dont even know what to say. that was amazing! sooo great.. it was amazingly great! when spencer was realizing that something was really wrong with ashley i could feel my heart start beating really quickly and i had to remind myself that its only a story haha!! awesome update though! i can't wait for the next one, pms :)




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