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Further pressure on the knife sped up the process significantly.

“Ashley doesn’t love him. One of the things that remained the same throughout it all was the fact that she was trying to get away from him.”

“He picked them up at the park.”

“So? That doesn’t mean she loves the guy. It doesn’t even mean she’s with him now.”

“You said she wasn’t.”

“I thought you were about to kill me. I don’t even remember a lot of what I said.”

The effort being extended not to kill her was growing by the second. Luckily, my psychosis was reserved for a lying duo. Not their fumbling accomplices.

“So she was using him too?”

“To a certain extent. They used each other. He got something out of it. She got something out of it. Madison and I both got something out of it. The whole idea was to make it work for everybody…well, except for you.”

“I noticed.”

“And yeah, there might have been someone else that benefited as well…someone close to Ashley.”

The thought of there being key players I wasn’t aware of had never crossed my mind. I was prepared to handle four. How many were there instead? How many people lined the road to Ashley Davies?

“Do I know him?”

Kyla actually smiled, and unbeknownst to her, its strangeness scared me. Never before had I been a witness to the visual image next to me. A woman bound in rope—helpless and vulnerable, knife at throat—smiling like a pleased child.

I repeated my question, careful not to betray my power with a tone of fear, “Do I know him or what?”

She continued that unnerving smile as she answered, “No, no. I don’t think you do,” she said casually, stilling her feet, “unless you know Rebecca.”

I sent it through the database, but the name didn’t bear any familiarity.

“No, I don’t know her. Who is she?”

She wrung as much pleasure possible out of answering, “Rebecca…Aiden’s wife.”

And just like that, the pieces of the puzzle were once again in humiliating disarray.



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11/11/2008, 19:31:30 PM
From: River_R 195.140.248.27
Comments: hey. 1st of all let me say: Sorry I didnt comment sooner! Your chapters keep getting better and better! I really feel this going to be ur best story ever, it's promising so far... I'm loving it!Regarding the update now: WOW! I can really feel it - the cold driven persue of revenge!! I totally understand where all of Spencer's twisted emotions are coming from... I've been stabbed in the back countless times, yeah its true, I given up counting. And I'm not talking about really serious stuff that put me in a delicate position every F****** time! When it takes its toll on u, rage builds up, u change... more like shapeshift into this dark form that u dinie existing within u. Breaking news: it dies exist! This is what makes us human! it's all about ying & yang, thats our essence! we all have alter egos or something of the sort, and u know what... it's not all bad! its only as bad as u want it to be. Okay, so what I'm trying to say is THIS (the sotry) feels real, its deep, sad, exciting and - I'm daring to say - somehow comforting in a weird way. I'm totally into this story! U're an amazing writer. I'm gonna be here through every twist and turn u may bring. 'til the very end.



11/11/2008, 19:53:20 PM
From: callmesalad 74.128.28.112
Comments: love this wow. you have to keep goin. PMS!!!!!



11/11/2008, 20:46:55 PM
From: mayagray 68.2.99.192
Comments: Haha you are devilishly good at twists and cliff hangers aren't you. Every other update of yours leaves me with a "uhh hhhuuh HUH?", a raised eyebrow and a dropped jaw. It's quite a sight let me tell you :) I LOVE it. I really do. And I am ever grateful for your dedication. I wasn't lying when I said I pictured it, I looked to my left at my front door and pictured the whole thing unfolding. It happens a lot when I read your writing, it's exquisite. (And a hell of a lot more fun when the scene unfolding before me is a saucy NC-17 spashley love scene ;) I'll miss your stories and amazing writing. Can't wait to see where this last masterpiece takes us. Oh and PMS DAMNIT!!!#%#@ haha.



11/11/2008, 21:00:59 PM
From: SoNFANFOREVER 74.79.230.169
Comments: wow it's amazing how far feeling betrayed can bring us. I can feel spencer's pain in this story over everything and it's something no human being should ever have to go through. your writing is simply fabulous and each update has me sitting on the edge of my chair biting my nails. truly great, pms!



11/11/2008, 22:11:05 PM
From: LoveAsh87 75.111.161.141
Comments: this was such freaky amazing update and it gets more interesting wit each update i wonder wat aidens wife has to do wit all of this i cant wait to find out...PMS NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



11/11/2008, 22:59:48 PM
From: jtsec9143 75.6.160.169
Comments: First off let me start by saying that i dig the quote you used at the beginning of this story... second, like always, this was amazing... i never know where the story is going, which really is the best part... your writing is so unpredictable... i can't wait for the next chapter. thanks for writing = )



11/12/2008, 00:19:21 AM
From: AIDANNE 24.73.232.58
Comments: shweeeeet...you never disapoint. Cheers mate.



11/12/2008, 01:33:41 AM
From: jazziejazz 71.254.153.99
Comments: i always comment and alot of the time im first and always on multiple sites and i dont get a shout out :( *pout* i dont know if i want to read anymore im jk it was realy good and i hate you for the cliff hanger and im still putting the peices together but im coming up blank we need an update :) sorry it took so long to comment :)



11/12/2008, 04:49:51 AM
From: Atg11 131.230.152.3
Comments: am getting more anxious and confuse...but i love it!!! PMS



11/12/2008, 10:18:23 AM
From: bigdude21 67.187.13.96
Comments: man i cant wait for spencer to start going on kill bill... sorry i mean kill ashley on everyone but now there is someone else who know about ashley's plan man who else was in on arthur to maybe becouse it seems like everyone else that has ties to the house was in on the abduction but now we need ashley pov come on ashley's pov i want to know whats going though the f'ed up mined of ashley davies maybe she does love spencer? maybe not but on please



11/12/2008, 14:37:28 PM
From: stix04 96.245.78.218
Comments: its scary how amazing a writer you are at such a young age...pms!



11/14/2008, 07:23:08 AM
From: chloedarko 123.2.250.126
Comments: Well my apologies, this is going to be HUGE, the comment that is so yeah yeah sorryyy. So I'm chloedarko on the Fanfiction.com website and I know I know, shame on me for having no patience! BUT, I just couldn't wait. I really couldn't lol. So I thought I'd check if the story was somewhere else on the internet. I decided to look on this site, 'cause this was the first site I was on, before fanfiction.com. So that brings me here, I read from I think chapter 3? That you're on on FF.com up until the start of this story.. and well this review will probably be massive because I'm basically going to comment on the entire story of The Dennison and this first chapter of the new story. Here goes.. F**K!! Throughout the story there was just SO many twists and surprises.. Like when Spencer had a client and it was her Dad. Absolutely died of laughter when that happened. I also loved the date between Ashley and Spencer, it was so beautiful €™s daughter was Spencer's brother's child. It was horrible when Aiden raped Spencer =( I liked how you put a lot of thought beforehand as to the detail you would provide for that chapter. But I would have to say, as with most readers I'm sure, when Ashley had disappeared from the playground was pretty shocking but somehow didn't surprise me that much. It seemed like a possible scenario. So many thoughts were running through my head though: 'Aiden kidnapped them!? What if Ashley just ditched?!' etc but holy s**t I did NOTTTT expect the ending! That totally just blew me right away. I was like NO! WTF!? ASHLEY COULDN'T HAVE PLANNED THIS!? =( Geeeez!It also amazed me how throughout the story you were able to weave facts and specific incidents into the story in order to make it pan out so brilliantly.Onto this chapter: Lol Spencer's got Kyla hostage. Go Spencer! I kinda still have hope that Ashley actually did love Spencer. Spencer will probably end up killing Ashley maybe anyway, or actually, who knows. Because with the twists you had in the first story. (I may have to repost this if my internet stuffs up and doesn't post the whole comment)Yeah again, sorry this is so long. Update soon :)




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