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“Yeah of course, you two are my best friends, why wouldn’t I?” I say and Abbey and Stacey hug me, and Spencer also joins in the hug. As much as I enjoy physical contact I kind of am claustrophobic. But soon enough we break from our hug and continue walking down the street and to my house.

 

Well I hope the rest of the day will turn out better than it has so far.

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Well guys that was my first chapter and I hoped you liked it. And Stacey, Abbey, and Spencer are based on my best friends in real life, but in real life they are much crazier and have different names.

 

So I like constructive criticism. If you found something you didn’t like please tell me and I will work on it





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09/05/2008, 03:23:13 AM
From: River_R 195.140.248.27
Comments: it´s good dear!! please post more soon :)



09/05/2008, 07:41:33 AM
From: son101 142.167.13.116
Comments: i like it pms



09/05/2008, 09:59:36 AM
From: *krish8708 124.217.6.163
Comments: HEY! great story u got there hah!for for first timer your good...hope to read more..like your story..



09/05/2008, 15:21:16 PM
From: Andrews.B 99.242.199.67
Comments: Yeah you're story is interesting :) For a first post ever you got it going good so far!



09/05/2008, 18:41:49 PM
From: TROPPER12 71.1.233.136
Comments: For your first story that was simply the best. Your just as good as me! lmao I'm lovin' it. PMS



09/06/2008, 12:21:18 PM
From: AxlRose 189.132.144.181
Comments: well, we do learn english in Mexico. but only in private schools, and in some the english really sucks. but in mine the english is regulated by cambridge university. haha okok i'll stop my rambling. anyways good story pms!




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